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Old 01.10.2004, 18:29   #1
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Sometimes the yellow autumn leaves
Cry under steps of passing people:
Just like the tiny velvet ripple
Dies in the depth of storming sees.

It matters not how pale the face,
How much the tears falling down,
You have the right to wear your crown
You have the right to keep your grace.
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Old 01.10.2004, 20:35   #2
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27px, much better than your previous works!
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Old 01.10.2004, 21:15   #3
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Гога>>
1. Sees >> Seas... sorry, a mere misspelling
2. "It matters not how pale the face" - you know, it is clear, that grammaticaly your version is more correct, but here i wanted to use exatly this form, with no predicate. No mistake

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Old 01.10.2004, 21:18   #4
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the ****, the muck
the restless flow
i'm getting dark
i'm getting slow

i puke through window
i puke through night
i **** the widow
i have no fright

the end is near
i see its light
the end is clear
no blood, no fight...
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27px

а потом пришел Агрегат

i see its light
может
I see no light?
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Сето, лавна, гитес? Мне понравилось
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Originally Posted by PsilocybeLarvae
27px

а потом пришел Агрегат

i see its light
может
I see no light?
Нет. Что вы. Кроме того на бухую голову очень не плохо вышло
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