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Old 05.03.2006, 12:02   #1
a little soap bubble
 
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Default [стих]Я не умею...

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Old 06.03.2006, 08:33   #2
Честный Кот
 
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Default Re: [стих]Я не умею...

Содержание - хорошо.
Но форма требует доработки: размер "скачет", рифмы - не всегда "попадают".
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Old 06.03.2006, 11:42   #3
toreador who can't kill
 
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Default Re: [стих]Я не умею...

хорошие стихи, несмотря даже на "скачки"...
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