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| the happiest girl Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Yerevan
Posts: 2,521
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73 | Fitter, Happier. Fitter happier More productive Comfortable Not drinking too much Regular excersise at the gym (3 days a week) Getting on better with your associate employee contemporaries At ease Eating well (no more microwave dinners and saturated fats) A patient better driver A safer car (baby smiling in back seat) Sleeping well (no bad dreams) No paranoia Careful to all animals (no washing spiders down the plughole) Keep in contact with old friends (enjoy a drink now and then) Will frequently check credit at (moral) bank (hole the wall) Favours for favours Fond but not in love Charity standing orders On Sunday ring road supermarket No killing moths or putting boiling water on the ants Car wash (also on sundays) No longer afraid of the dark Or midday shadows Nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate Nothing so childish At a better pace Slower and more calculated No chance of escape Now self-employed Concerned (but powerless) An empowered and informed member of society (pragmatism not idealism) Will not cry in public Less chance of illness Tyres that grip in the wet (shot of baby strapped in back seat) A good memory Still cries at a good film Still kisses with saliva No longer empty and frantic Like a cat Tied to a stick That's driven into Frozen winter **** (the ability to laugh at weakness) Calm Fitter, healthier and more productive A pig In a cage On antibiotics Radiohead OK Computer
__________________ So much good, so much evil. Just add water. (c) |
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| Дошкольник Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Armenia
Posts: 116
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10 | This piece is more like one of Ginsberg's opuses, or roughly Joyce's stream of consciousness than a song, which I hoped I would find. My impression is well bleak, as the piece is too much ordinary and ryhmes broken should have been compenstaed by witty or intense phrases and effective thoughts. Well, ideas are commonplace, form is conventinal, nothing new I learned in it. Sorry, Larvae, but my opinion let not discourage you, if this piece has taken to you. Ved' Larvae, takoye ya sochinyayu v techenii desyati minut. Mnogo u mneya bylo poxohix idey, odnako ni odna ne stala konechny pesney. They developed and became serious or beautifl ballads!
__________________ Mir lomaet kazhdogo, i mnogie potom tol'ko krepche na izlome. |
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