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15.10.2004, 17:32
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Courtesy to Tolkien
A Legend
An elven prince was born at night
At sunrise he was gone
And ever since he has no home
And wanders all alone
From place to place, from land to land
Hope in his heart, staff in his hand
An ancient sword beneath his cloak
From place to place he has to walk
A time will come for stars to fade
In cold and bitter night
A time for him to face his fate,
Step forth, take up the fight
His horn will steer the wilderness
To gather up his folk
Out of the dim forgetfulness
Into renewed hope
A youthful lord of Fair Race
He knows the pity, holds the grace
But till he grows in strength and might
He’s forced to flee; he has to hide.
The Ranger
“In courage keep your heart,
In strength lift up your hand."
R. Kipling
The ranger closed his eyes
The ranger held his breath
His task is to survive
His hope is to believe
His memory is bright
Of the land beyond this land
“In courage keep your heart
In strength lift up your hand”
One day he will return
Through perils and dismay
To watch a silver dawn
Grow into golden day…
And if the rainy days
Will eat away my strength
You’ll see me close my eyes
You’ll hear me hold my breath.
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15.10.2004, 17:36
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ненавижу толкиена
ненавижу эльфов
ненавижу гномов
ненавижу этих гондо...рцев
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15.10.2004, 17:38
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Hahaha, hey there. I take it as a compliment. However, this is a neutral zone, so if you want to fight, see you at the Black Gates
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15.10.2004, 18:04
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нап фиг эльфов
нафиг дунаданов
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15.10.2004, 20:37
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Ohhhh
Great 
I had a modest hope to hear something about my poems... And what I get instead  I am not going to argue with you.
Why is this world so evel? I guess it is time for me to move on again. Farewell.
Wraps himself in his worn out cloak and disappears in the evening mist.
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16.10.2004, 05:46
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это на древнеэльфийском написанно?
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16.10.2004, 09:53
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Древнеэльфийский пока хромает. Так что - I stick to Engilsh (ocasionally Russian)
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16.10.2004, 13:52
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не в крусе
не было такого в средиземье
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16.10.2004, 18:00
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Never mind
Anyways, thanks for atention and for a chat, even though I guess it was not due to my writing. It was simply the name "Tolkien" that got your attention.
This was a first ever attempt on my side to make my writings public. Don't feel like doing it again... See you at politics forums. Or perhaps we should delete this thread whatsoever?
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16.10.2004, 18:05
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опять на непонятном языке пишет
Мордор вас всех побрал
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16.10.2004, 18:06
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No need to delete the thread. Your poems are quite good, really. They have THE mood 
got some more?
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16.10.2004, 20:51
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Дошло!!!
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Originally Posted by Sauron
опять на непонятном языке пишет
Мордор вас всех побрал
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Извиняюсь. Впредь буду придерживаться общепринятого языка. Оцените: на то чтобы написать ети два предложения ушло 5 минут 
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16.10.2004, 21:00
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Originally Posted by Vega$
No need to delete the thread. Your poems are quite good, really. They have THE mood
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Спасибо. Есть еще, но эти пожалуй самые любимые. До меня только что дошло как ето по детски - выкладывать что-то на форум и просить чтобы кто-то что-то сказал.  Наверое я тут немного освоюсь и еще чего-нибудь "выложу"
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16.10.2004, 21:09
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да милости просим
мы тут добрые
не обращайте на нас внимания
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02.11.2004, 11:04
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Originally Posted by Strider
A Legend
An elven prince was born at night
At sunrise he was gone
And ever since he has no home
And wanders all alone
From place to place, from land to land
Hope in his heart, staff in his hand
An ancient sword beneath his cloak
From place to place he has to walk
A time will come for stars to fade
In cold and bitter night
A time for him to face his fate,
Step forth, take up the fight
His horn will steer the wilderness
To gather up his folk
Out of the dim forgetfulness
Into renewed hope
A youthful lord of Fair Race
He knows the pity, holds the grace
But till he grows in strength and might
He’s forced to flee; he has to hide.
The Ranger
“In courage keep your heart,
In strength lift up your hand."
R. Kipling
The ranger closed his eyes
The ranger held his breath
His task is to survive
His hope is to believe
His memory is bright
Of the land beyond this land
“In courage keep your heart
In strength lift up your hand”
One day he will return
Through perils and dismay
To watch a silver dawn
Grow into golden day…
And if the rainy days
Will eat away my strength
You’ll see me close my eyes
You’ll hear me hold my breath.
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wow !  may i use your poetry as a base for my next 2 songs? (c) will be preserved... i was kinda inspired by these lyrics... so coolio... super
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