This piece is more like one of Ginsberg's opuses, or roughly Joyce's stream of consciousness than a song, which I hoped I would find. My impression is well bleak, as the piece is too much ordinary and ryhmes broken should have been compenstaed by witty or intense phrases and effective thoughts. Well, ideas are commonplace, form is conventinal, nothing new I learned in it. Sorry, Larvae, but my opinion let not discourage you, if this piece has taken to you.
Ved' Larvae, takoye ya sochinyayu v techenii desyati minut. Mnogo u mneya bylo poxohix idey, odnako ni odna ne stala konechny pesney. They developed and became serious or beautifl ballads!
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Mir lomaet kazhdogo, i mnogie potom tol'ko krepche na izlome.
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