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[стих]Я не умею...
05.03.2006, 12:02
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[стих]Я не умею...
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Re: [стих]Я не умею...
06.03.2006, 08:33
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Re: [стих]Я не умею...
Содержание - хорошо.
Но форма требует доработки: размер "скачет", рифмы - не всегда "попадают".
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06.03.2006, 11:42
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хорошие стихи, несмотря даже на "скачки"...
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